Awakening

There is one word for this poem, Shoe - and that is 'beautiful' ;) I really, really love how fluid this poem is - it flows so well and I like all the little detail's you've used - like the inclusion of the Celtic cross! Well done!

Magic xxx

Thank you very much Magic, I really pleased you like this, :~}

Magic has said it all. Just beautiful;-)

Tina

I love it, too. The 'scene changes' and lulling rhythm of it. Cheered me up, well done.

Thanks Tina, glad you think so,

Thank you Tedshirt, pleased it cheered you up, now your comment has cheered me up,

Yes, very beautiful indeed. You did it again ;-)

Nathan.

Thank you very much Nathan, for reading and for your kind comment,

I like it too but the typos are very annoying.

Line 2 should be 'arches'
Line 5 should be 'hands'

3rd last line: lose the apostrophe after beckons'

Sorry, but it's a lovely poem and deserves proper English and I am an old pedant.

A cherry awaits!

Hands up, arches and hands were my fault, but beckons was inserted by my (useless) spellcheck,
Thanks Tony, I appreciate your comments,
note to self: proof read more.

Yet again you bring incredible depth and atmosphere - well done on the cherry, it was deserved (even if tc is an old pedant) :--)

Thanks Kheldar , support from the editors is always welcome, as are cherries, :~}