Forgive me

You choice of vocabulary is highly effective, Shirley.

I.e. 'Swear unquestioning blind obedience,
Plead contrition, repent, recant...'

Well done on a much-deserved cherry.

Tina x

Thanks Tina, I had to google most of 'em, ha,ha,
seriously, I'm pleased I made the effort now,:~D

Congratulations on the cherry, shoe. As Tina so rightly observes, great word use :--)

Brilliant last line, Shirley! Well done on a well-deserved cherry ;)

Magic xxx

Kheldar, thank you my darling, one from the head rather than the heart,

:~}xx

Thank you so much Magic, Pleased you think so!

I really like this. Very good.

Hi Christine, thank you very much.

Shirley.

I also really liked this. Excellent choice of words, so powerful and honest.

I love the last lines;
'Plead contrition, repent, recant
I’ve already been to hell and back,
for you.'

Beeme xx

Thanks Beeme, I struggled to finish the poem off effectivly and in the end just left it as "for you", so I'm really glad it worked for you,