heartbreak

Hello Shoe.
I really liked this and I thought it would be great to finish off the rhyme.
I'm sorry but I couldn't do it -
I lost the heart of it...
but I thought perhaps it might amuse you.

We ran around like children
We fought like man and wife
and in the quieter moments
I told you of my life

You broke my heart so slowly
and all the time I knew,
A hundred little fractures
resilient to glue

Now I'm in recovery
in fear that you will know
in fear that if I see you that
the hairline cracks will show.

thank you for your comments, I'm a newbie so all improvements accepted with grace, yours rhyme better!

Nice,

Now I'm in recovery,
But fear that you will know,
The moment that you see me
The hairline cracks will show.

Nick

Thanks Nick, why didn't I think of that!

Shirley