One cold night


from the ABC set Ramblings of a poetaster

An opera breasted pigeon does a balancing act,
to feast on the last of the berries
knowing by osmosis his impunity
to poison and next doors cat.

And your hair smells of woodsmoke from blowing the embers
your fingertips brand me, a maori tattoo,
powdery snow drifts by the window
if we were in greenland we could be marooned,
exisiting for months on powdered milk and spam
sleeping monarchs, curled, cocooned.

In this small Essex town, the snow turns to rain,
at midnight, tommorrow slips in...
the fire is cold, the pigeon long gone
the heat dissipates, from where you have lain.

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Comments

Beeme | January 7, 2010 - 13:11

I really enjoyed this, I especially like the last stanza. Beeme xx

MistakenMagic | January 7, 2010 - 16:53

The second stanza is just brilliant! Really, really enjoyed this one! Too many beautiful images to quote ;)

Magic xxx

shoe | January 8, 2010 - 10:08

Thank you Beeme, and Magic, for your kind comments, made my day,:~}

Silver Spun Sand | January 8, 2010 - 10:57

A beautiful poem, culminating in a superb two-line finale. Much enjoyed.

Tina ;-)x

shoe | January 8, 2010 - 17:10

Ta very much, :~}}