‘Crimson dress
that clings so tight.
She’s out of reach
and out of sight...’
She glides past me
parting the air
with a rustle of silk;
her perfume, drifts
on the wind – potent
long after she is gone...
That old song springs
to mind...
I was young...
then; about her age.
Time goes so fast –
literally flies...like
the tips of her feathers
that just brushed
my face.

Comments
ScoZen | June 21, 2011 - 15:09
I have a thing for crimson dresses.
Not that I wear them of course.
"...her perfume, drifts on the wind – potent
long after she is gone..."
A loving and touching memory.
skinner_jennifer | June 21, 2011 - 16:52
Hello Tina,
Oh! happy memories that song brings to mind, I was
madly in love with Paul Jones from Mannfred Mann,
I had pictures of him all over my bedroom wall.
Later when my son was born, I called him Paul Jones,
after my hero, still listen to him on the radio,
playing blues music, which I love.
Thankyou for reminding me of that special song.
Your poem has such air of delicateness about it.
Simply beautiful.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | June 21, 2011 - 17:26
Hi Tina,
just thought I would come back to say, I cannot get
that song out of my mind. I shall probably be
singing it till I go to bed.
But it's a great song to get stuck in my head, so
I don't mind at all.
Jenny.
Silver Spun Sand | June 21, 2011 - 17:43
Thanks, Jenny;-)
That song has special memories for me too. It was at that time in my life when I was just discovering who I was, and I too, was madly in love with Paul Jones.
Really glad you enjoyed this and appreciate hearing about your memories. He was a fantastic blues player too, I couldn't agree more.
Tina
Silver Spun Sand | June 21, 2011 - 17:44
Can't get it out of my head either, but I've only myself to blame;-) Tina
Silver Spun Sand | June 21, 2011 - 17:44
Can't get it out of my head either, but I've only myself to blame;-) Tina
Highhat | June 21, 2011 - 18:01
I remember that song too. I loved Manfred Mann but can't remember Paul Jones !! Lovely poem
;)Pia
Silver Spun Sand | June 21, 2011 - 18:17
Hi there, Pia. Paul Jones was the lead singer of Manfred Mann. He was really dishy...or at least Jenny and I think so;-)
Pleased you enjoyed and thanks so much for telling me.
Tina;-)
Nathan Bednarek | June 21, 2011 - 22:36
A lovely rhythm accompanies some gorgeous imagery. This poem's a treat to read.
Well done ;-)
Nathan x
Silver Spun Sand | June 22, 2011 - 07:57
Thanks, Nathan;-) Pleased you enjoyed.
Tina xx