"In These Shoes?"

Good voice poem.

Probably would go for I'd rather than I would in second last line for consistency of tone.

You work fast. Good. I read fast.

Regards
Ewan

Do you know, Ewan - I just changed it! Couldn't make up my mind, but you just made it up for me. Thanks for that and for reading.

Tina:-)

Indeed a good voice poem. Great fun, and it just seems full of life. And must be one of the quickest cherries on record! Nice work. Margot

Love the rhythm and sound patterning in this one Tina - and I bet the cherry pickers agree ;) You're so great at these voice poems, I've never dared to try one before!

Magic xxx

You do work fast Tina. I haven't even started thinking about it yet. Mind you, slow or fast you always produce work of the highest quality and this is no exception.

Luigi xxx

Another fine piece Tina - and different. Well done on the cherry:) sarah x

if you don't already know it check out this song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISzoUdtMSH4&feature=related

Fab. Margot

Margo - many thanks for that;-) Shall have a look. Much appreciated.

Tina

You should give it a whirl, Magic;-) As they say, there is a first time for everything and I am sure you would come up trumps!

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Tina xxx

Luigi - you always say the nicest things. I thank you;-)

Mind you, I don't work so fast where housework is concerned. Not very inspiring at the best of times, is it?

Tina xxx

My thanks to you, Sarah. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. Much appreciated;-)

Tina x

very witty, and enjoyable. Good song recommendation from Margot.

Thank, Drax;-)

Yes, wasn't it just!

Tina

Hehe, reminds me of some of my mates back in secondary school... ;-p

A lovely poem and a well deserved cherry!

Nathan xox

Really enjoyed this Tina, well done,as well as being a good voice I found I could see it too. Love Val x

Hi Tina.

I like the twist at the end in this one and really liked these verses :

Thought I’d get some in Oxfam
but a bloke threw me out
and I weren’t doing nothin’
’cept lighting me snout.

and

Hey, what’s eatin’ ya mate?
Ain’t ya never seen feet?
Bit grubby, I’ll grant yer,
but they scrub up a treat!

Thanks.
J ;-)

Know what you mean, Nathan;-) Thanks for reading...and stuff.

Tina xox

Much appreciate your lovely comment, Val. Thank you;-)

Tina x

My favourite verses too, Jupiter.

I had me some real fun writing this one, as you can imagine...and thanks for reading and appreciating;-)

Tina;-)

Great stuff Tina, the voice is just perfect; well deserved cherry.

Chris XX

My thanks to you Chris. You're a star;-)

Tina XX

this is unpolished and edgy stuff without any pretense or snobbery and yet has this superiority of quality that many can only dream to achieve .... take a bow!

the last stanza is a clincher!

Rusty - thank you for reading. I really appreciate your comments which are always so much help to us 'would be' writers. I shall make the time later today to read some of your subs and once again thank you for taking an interest in mine;-)

Tina

Hi again, Julie. I love that musical, 'Oliver'. They don't write 'em like that any more, unfortunately.

Glad you enjoyed 'your wedding' and as you say, it is just going somewhere together, no matter where, that makes it special.

Have a good day;-)

Tina

new Silver-spun-sand this is wonderful and
I can definitely feel Rhythm hear like Musical "Oliver! "I'd do anything for you"
You could do film! you would be made.
many congrats: on Cherry.
Wedding fantastic nice get out
to-gether.No never do so I joined all groups.
But always in all circumstances and acciddents
by his side.Have to be included. we were at Wedding.300 there from vicar getting married from university all over the world told, met priests and friend's some I knew.Thought be small church and about dozen entirely wrong.Weather service, food,music live etc; fantastic.Then met all and others.Picked me up after not included in Mum In Laws
80th here all secrte servic mobile and held in a place and daughter and all back after.But this fantastic.Bells pealing top hat do seemed came out cafe.Everyone mixed so well.Mine did videoing so bit down re; looking at it all and fabulous "Song of Songs" reading.
julie xx (:-

Wow you really are quite talented. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thanks so much, Beksta:-) Have to say, this is one of my favourites too.

Warm regards

Tina;-)

Thanks so much, Beksta:-) Have to say, this is one of my favourites too.

Warm regards

Tina;-)