Verity Jones


from the ABC set Silver Spun Sand Poems

It was her hat caught my eye –
a red beret. It blew, skittish,
along the sand; miles I ran.
Recaptured it, eventually.

“Thank you,” she said,
as I placed it in her hand.
“It’s got a life of its own!”
Anchored on her head
by a wing and a prayer.
Verity Jones was her name.

Peckish, we ate lunch –
a strawberry shake
and some fries.
She lost a sandal
hunting for shells
when a playful wave
knocked her off her feet.

Her T-shirt soaking wet
I gave her mine.
She sniffed the hem –
said it smelled of the sea.
I counted the freckles
on her dimpled cheeks.

We watched the moonrise –
the sunset sky mirrored
in eyes that clearly belied
what her lips said. “This,
the first time.”
Bodies entwined
we slept beneath the pier.

A milk-white dawn
awoke me. I was alone.
She was long-gone
so was my wallet
and my mobile phone.
In their stead a red beret
with a mind of its own.

Verity by name
but not by nature
was my Miss Jones.

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Comments

Ewan | September 1, 2008 - 10:37

Marvellous.
I particularly liked the image of beret blown skittish across the sand, the parenthetic 'skittish' being in keeping with what I found a playful tone throughout.

I am ambivalent about the last stanza, it's a nice joke but... I think it's the 'was my Miss Jones.'
What about 'Goodbye, Miss Jones' or even "Farewell, etc.'?

Anyway, enjoyed this one very much indeed.

Regards
Ewan

Silver Spun Sand | September 1, 2008 - 16:56

My thanks to you for reading, Ewan and I'm glad you found it worthwhile. As to your suggestion, I shall sleep on it as they say. But I sincerely hope I shan't wake up in such dire circumstance as the narrator of this poem! ;-)

Tina