you shall have prophetic powers beyond belief,
release yourself of your sarcasm,
become Medusa,
you shall see things
about your land of spirits,
your vision quest,
you are the dearest,
most excellent,
surpassing men in knowledge.
but never knowing when to stop,
blow yourself into infinity's rainbow
know the strength of your divine soul,
your platinum mind,
bend your knees
and be as he is.
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | June 9, 2009 - 17:49
Like this Steve...a lot.
Particularly admired these lines:-
"...blow yourself into infinity's rainbow
know the strength of your divine soul,
your platinum mind..."
Tina
jennifer | June 9, 2009 - 17:52
You always seem to pick out the lines I like best, Tina! I like those too!
J x
jennifer | June 9, 2009 - 17:52
You always seem to pick out the lines I like best, Tina! I like those too!
J x
Steve | June 11, 2009 - 07:25
This poem felt too good. I need to revise it sometime. Poetry should aim beyond the pleasure principle.