Removing the Mirrors


from the ABC set Miscellany

They sat together as the forbidding shadows slid
from the corners of the room
and wrapped around her.
She described a patchwork of memories,
connected only by the thread of uncertainty,
her account punctuated by girlish giggles
and feint transparent sighs.

They turned the pages of a family album
to prompt more recent recollections.
But the portraits had no meaning for her.

She demanded her dinner
although her plate lay empty on the table,
wiped clean by her finger only moments before

Swinging her feet like a petulant child,
she gazed at the favourite ruby red leather
slipping from her weary toes.
Then a fugitive smile softened the lines around her mouth.
Are these my shoes?
Where are my shoes?
Where’s my dinner?

Later, the face of a stranger
stared back at her from the mirror
and fear marked the cruelty of her confusion.
So they removed the mirrors
one
by one.
But the days continued to tangle her thoughts
and suffocate her fragile identity.

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Comments

QueenElf | August 7, 2008 - 20:55

This spoke to me in so many ways. Both my parents had strokes & were incpable of speaking or remembering anything. My dad was happy, my mum seemed to remember things. I thought the word " feint" was used with feeling.A thoughtful & loving tribute.

sunshine | August 8, 2008 - 06:56

Thank you QueenElf, so distressing to see both your parents suffer and isolated in this way. Margot

Dan Ryder | August 8, 2008 - 16:32

excellent, a moving read

sunshine | August 9, 2008 - 08:57

thanks Dan. Margot

Dynamaso | August 12, 2008 - 07:04

I agree - this is a very good, moving piece.

MistakenMagic | August 15, 2008 - 21:25

The first stanza provides such a beautiful start! And the whole poem is very touching, I'm sure many people can relate to it.

sunshine | August 16, 2008 - 17:39

Many thanks Dynamaso & Mistaken Magic. Margot

Bradene | October 11, 2008 - 11:02

This was to me very moving, so many of my friends have had either strokes or suffered from Alzheimer's it is a difficult and sad thing to experience. You captured the essence of both conditions here. Val