Diamonds and Coloured Glass

Very nice and an interesting rhythm. I like the idea of a pill called 'Common Sense' but you'd have to force people to take it.

I like this threeleaf. There's always someone like this everywhere I've lived- you look at them, and then you look at their partner and you think "why?"

Cheers chuck; we used to have an old saying here, if one of the lads was acting like a complete arsehole:
'Go and buy yourself a bottle of Cop-on!' - seldom worked either.

Yea, I know it insert. A good mate of mine from school (and that's not today or yesterday) had this type of experience. We are trying to convince her, that there is a life after and it's not too late. After years of abuse (psychological)she is finding it hard. She was a lovely bubbly kid and a smashing looker; she's just gotta remember which cupboard she stored her self-confidence in and get it out, dust it off and start using it again. It ain't no easy search and a lot of rust has to be cleaned off.
Thanks for reading.

You're writing some really rhythmic poems these days Chris and they're all superb to read! I also love the idea of a 'common sense' pill - but what happens if you take an overdose?

Magic xxx

Great work Chris, love the rhythm in this piece. I would like to see you do a serious and emotional piece again .You're good with the humour etc and I enjoy them. Yet my favorite piece of yours is "peace removen" even though you had to explain some parts to me, I understood it and loved the twist and seriousness in it. Please, I would love to see something like that again, fiction or non-fiction which ever you perfer. I felt that piece brought the best out of you.

P.s. looking through your work, sauna was flipping deep lol, funniest shit I have ever read. Simple yet kept me reading. I don't undertand why nobody commented on that. I would have but I didn't know you existed back then.

This is song like - I love it Chris. The rhythm really helps the words along, doesn't fight with them at all. Great stuff:)
sarah x

Thanks Magic; an overdose of common sense? I don't know, I suppose you can have to much love (depending on the context), I believe that you can have to much money...can't figure out how to much common sense could be bad. Maybe it's a case of; better to much than not enough ;)

Hey Pinda, I tend to get serious in small bursts and with great effort lol...but I'll give it a go.

Glad you liked 'Sauna'. I got that piece out of going to the gym with my super-fit son; nearly killed me. I followed him into the cold shower on the way out and nearly had a fecking heart attack lol; he nearly bust his nuts laughing at me.

Sometimes I get loads of comments for pieces that I may not really think deserve them and other times....maybe it just didn't hit the funny bone in others that it hit in me LOL. My sense of humour can be a bit weird at times; glad you enjoyed it anyway.

Thanks for the comments Pin, much appreciated. ;)

Hi sarah, glad you liked; feel free to sing along, I won't mind at all ;)(;