Hopelessness


from the ABC set shamrock's ramblings

Future accompanied by Hope
and Chance, knocked on my door,
seeking an embrace.

I lay inside entwined with Past
and Regret in perverted abandon;
swallowing Misery, gagging!

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Comments

lenchenelf | September 7, 2009 - 20:37

Short, sharp observation....recognition is half the battle? Interesting that you should give these concepts identity, as Nouns? all the very best Lenax
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Doh! just spotted the teaser to this !

chuck | September 7, 2009 - 21:04

It's a wonder you get any sleep threeleaf.

threeleafshamrock | September 7, 2009 - 21:23

lol, your a long time dead chuck ;)

threeleafshamrock | September 7, 2009 - 21:46

Thanks Lena, just noticed my answer to your comment did not come up...sorry about that. I am some severe problems with my broadband and it's driving me nuts...that's what comes of living in the arsehole of nowhere, I suppose ;)

MistakenMagic | September 7, 2009 - 22:30

I get a strange image of a perverted 'Pilgrim's Progress' in my head - but just ignore my sleep-deprived mind! Love this and great to see you trying new forms!

Magic xxx

threeleafshamrock | September 8, 2009 - 07:10

Thanks Magic; I'll try anything - at least - once ;) Glad you liked XXXX