An old battered suitcase


from the ABC set shamrock's ramblings

An old battered suitcase;
small, brown; corners softened,
clips rusted.

A leather belt; same colour
same condition! Buckled
around it.

I remember watching him
as he walked away,
looking back.

One hand waving as leaves fell.
The other holding the case;
Mum crying!

He would return for Christmas;
presents from England,
in brown paper!

He worked across the sea,
he told me; another country;
a builder!

Life was his only educator,
a life of hard work, his lessons;
well learned!

Some called him an Irish Navvy
but I only ever knew him
as Dad.

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Comments

Dynamaso | March 28, 2009 - 23:20

Ah, the last stanza is fabulous and ties it all together like

"A leather belt; same colour
same condition! Buckled
around it."

Beautiful work, mate. Thanks :)

threeleafshamrock | March 29, 2009 - 07:59

Cheers D.

Silver Spun Sand | March 29, 2009 - 16:01

A little gem, this one, Chris. It really tugged at my heart strings. Brilliantly poignant.

Tina xx

threeleafshamrock | March 30, 2009 - 10:25

Thanks Tina, he was a special man!

Chris XX