Cracked and stained, of life and death
and something in between…
Of ghosts that flit, with teasing breath;
that seemed as ever-green.
Eyes; unsheltered, shattered lens,
proclaim a soul laid bare…
And yet a gateway to old friends,
insist the harking share.
Liberty and sadness vie
for dominance in mind…
And oils of long forgotten sighs,
can seem a sight unkind.
Far better, not to look upon
this mangled heart turned stone…
but now, alas, the deed is done,
and I am more alone.
Thus turned away, with misty view,
I seek once more the road…
And leave for all, the youth I knew;
a broken down abode!
Chris Birrane © 2011

Comments
maggyvaneijk | August 20, 2011 - 09:33
A fantastic poem about the past, I also liked what you wrote in the preview, about memory and distortion.
MistakenMagic | August 20, 2011 - 14:09
Very reminiscent of Robert Frost, Chris. Truly haunting. Well done!
Magic xxx
threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2011 - 14:16
Thank you Maggy. Your kind words much appreciated
Chris :)
threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2011 - 14:18
Thanks Magic; Frost is one of my favourites, so VERY nice comment...
Chris ;)
threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2011 - 14:19
Wow, thanks for the cherry folks :D
Richard L. Prov... | August 20, 2011 - 22:07
A lovely poem, lie John Masefield. Great descriptions. Richard LP
threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2011 - 22:20
Thanks Richard, glad you liked ..
Chris ;)
AlexPickett | August 22, 2011 - 14:54
Wonderful. The words and emotions flow brilliantly.
threeleafshamrock | August 24, 2011 - 07:34
Thanks Alex, glad you liked
Chris ;)