The Old House


from the ABC set shamrock's ramblings

Cracked and stained, of life and death
and something in between…
Of ghosts that flit, with teasing breath;
that seemed as ever-green.

Eyes; unsheltered, shattered lens,
proclaim a soul laid bare…
And yet a gateway to old friends,
insist the harking share.

Liberty and sadness vie
for dominance in mind…
And oils of long forgotten sighs,
can seem a sight unkind.

Far better, not to look upon
this mangled heart turned stone…
but now, alas, the deed is done,
and I am more alone.

Thus turned away, with misty view,
I seek once more the road…
And leave for all, the youth I knew;
a broken down abode!

Chris Birrane © 2011

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Comments

maggyvaneijk | August 20, 2011 - 09:33

A fantastic poem about the past, I also liked what you wrote in the preview, about memory and distortion.

MistakenMagic | August 20, 2011 - 14:09

Very reminiscent of Robert Frost, Chris. Truly haunting. Well done!

Magic xxx

threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2011 - 14:16

Thank you Maggy. Your kind words much appreciated

Chris :)

threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2011 - 14:18

Thanks Magic; Frost is one of my favourites, so VERY nice comment...

Chris ;)

threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2011 - 14:19

Wow, thanks for the cherry folks :D

Richard L. Prov... | August 20, 2011 - 22:07

A lovely poem, lie John Masefield. Great descriptions. Richard LP

threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2011 - 22:20

Thanks Richard, glad you liked ..

Chris ;)

AlexPickett | August 22, 2011 - 14:54

Wonderful. The words and emotions flow brilliantly.

threeleafshamrock | August 24, 2011 - 07:34

Thanks Alex, glad you liked

Chris ;)