The Poet's Tears

The poet cried
and the people sighed
and marvelled at the beauty of his tears.
The poet's heart
all but fell apart,
they stood awed, as he showed them their fears.

There was a shout,
as they tumbled out;
how is it, you see into our minds?
The poet said,
it's your tears I shed
search your souls, it is what you will find

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Comments

russiandoll | May 12, 2011 - 20:17

Like :) especially the first two stanzas.

threeleafshamrock | May 12, 2011 - 21:26

Thanks russiandoll, got rid of the third stanza, didn't like it myself. Thanks for taking the time...

Chris ;)

Silver Spun Sand | May 13, 2011 - 07:59

I agree, Chris. The two stanzas are find as they stand. Same as russiandoll, I like it too;-)

Tina xx

threeleafshamrock | July 20, 2011 - 10:06

Thanks again lovely Tina

Chris ;)