Purity Lost


from the ABC set Lurve Ramblings

When young, how love too, was young.
Fresh, suckling; innocent,
dependant and unquestioning.

Honest wants, needs, desires,
were played to be won,
painless victory assured.

Where was swaddled purity lost?
When did cheating choices,
choose to spoil or complicate?

Was it pugilistic puberty,
brought awareness to
wear and fray, with bravado?

Could it be adolescent
angst, that sulking, sullenly
declared its strength a weakness?

Or would yet adult err, with mature
madness, mangle servitude,
promoting serf to master of all?

Who e’re the villain be, I wish
bestowed, the harshest punishment,
for the death, he hath caused!

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Comments

threeleafshamrock | March 20, 2011 - 20:26

Wow, thanks for the cherry folks; that's brightened up a cold, grey Sunday...

Chris ;)

Dynamaso | March 21, 2011 - 05:37

There are some great stanzas in this piece, Chris but my favourite is the first - suckling indeed!

threeleafshamrock | March 21, 2011 - 17:42

lol, thanks D. Yeah, a baby's/mother's love just 'is', no questions asked, accepted. It's when we start disecting love, complicate it, that we get in trouble...

Chris ;)

Highhat | March 21, 2011 - 18:18

You are quite right about dissecting love and it being ruined that way. What a brilliant piece of poetry here Chris. Such a fabulous way of expressing yourself. The innocent and the damned !!!
;)Pia

threeleafshamrock | March 21, 2011 - 18:22

Thanks Pia, you are too kind ;)

Chris xxx