Secrets


from the ABC set Lurve Ramblings

You smiled wanly, through tears,
knife poised
but uncut onions,
do not make
one cry....

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Comments

Beeme | May 16, 2010 - 10:14

very touching and sad, nearly made me cry.

Beeme xx

shoe | May 16, 2010 - 16:27

There is so much unsaid that somehow gets through these few words. poised writing.

maggyvaneijk | May 18, 2010 - 22:15

a short and delicate piece and yet like the above commentators I feel like so much was said with so little words