Another day, another game
We hit the pitch with spirits high
To win respect, if not acclaim
Just give our best; not live or die
A July morn with shadows cast
the brand new ball with bright red gleam
and with the sun-baked wicket fast;
was tailor-made for bowling seam.
Positions taken; you in slips
I watched the batsman mark his crease
he concentrated, licked his lips;
my short sharp run and quick release.
The ball soared down the wicket true;
it pitched just short of where I’d planned.
The seam bit hard and leg-side flew
it caught the batsman’s leading hand
It seemed to dip and then to rise,
the ball I swear, took on a life.
As if it’s path were just disguise
it struck your head; cut like a knife!
You yelled out loud but smiled at first
and raised hands to congratulate
but then your mood changed; bubble burst!
Why did it suddenly frustrate?
You fair attacked, accusing me;
I’d aimed for you, you did implore.
No matter how I’d disagree
You’d read my mind; you knew the score!
I wondered if it was for real
or some joke we would later share.
But further comments set the seal
they really filled me with despair.
How could a friend think such of me?
How could you think me such a creep?
To hurt someone so consciously;
to open up a wound so deep!
What’s done is done and I give up;
there’s only so far I can go!
I’ve thrown the dice and passed the cup,
I’ve paid you all I feel I owe.
And so it is with real dismay
That I go my way, you go yours.
A friendship sadly blown away
And locked outside the slamming doors.

Comments
sarah wilson | July 21, 2009 - 13:58
Beautifully crafted around the cricket metaphor - but very sad Chris :( sarah x
threeleafshamrock | July 21, 2009 - 14:40
I agree sarah...about the sad part I mean, thanks for reading
Chris X
pinda | July 21, 2009 - 14:53
I like the way you wrote the last verse,blood brilliant mate.
"And so it is with real dismay
That I go my way, you go yours.
A friendship sadly blown away
And locked outside the slamming doors.
Great yet sad stuff
threeleafshamrock | July 21, 2009 - 14:59
Thanks Pin, appreciated!
Sikander | July 21, 2009 - 20:09
A very gentlemanly answer to what I consider a rather childish attack. Keep them coming, please.
lenchenelf | July 21, 2009 - 20:24
Your writing goes from strength to strength, cracking narrative atb Lena
threeleafshamrock | July 22, 2009 - 07:45
Thanks Sikander, appreciate your comments.
threeleafshamrock | July 22, 2009 - 07:46
Thanks Lena XX
threeleafshamrock | July 22, 2009 - 11:22
Thanks very much for the cherry folks; unexpected but welcome. ;)
Silver Spun Sand | July 22, 2009 - 11:30
A brilliant poem Chris. Have only just stumbled upon it, and I am glad I did.
Tina xx
threeleafshamrock | July 22, 2009 - 13:03
Thanks Tina ;) I'm glad you did too. XX