I saw a woman with a broken heart
and the tears rolling down her cheeks.
I asked her “Woman, what is wrong with you?”
but she couldn’t move her mouth to speak.
Yet the look in her eyes said everything;
it said everything about love;
about the sorrow and the heartache
like the sky falling down from above.
I saw a woman with a happy smile
and she was dancing all around.
I asked her "Woman, is your love worthwhile?”
but she did not make a sound.
Yet the look in her eyes said everything;
it said everything about love;
about the majesty and the beauty
like the stars shining bright up above.
Comments
SundaysChild | December 2, 2010 - 00:02
I like this.
well-wisher | December 2, 2010 - 16:31
Thank you, SundaysChild
well-wisher | December 5, 2010 - 14:13
Thanks, Cavalcaderl, glad you liked it.
Cavalcaderl | December 5, 2010 - 16:58
new Well-wisher
I too enjoyed this poem,and
for the IP. And the look in her eyes
can and will explain everything,true.
julie x
Cavalcaderl | December 6, 2010 - 19:36
new Well-wisher
Hi! would you like me to
chnage mine to the title
of "Ole Blue Eyes!" I could
maybe more appropiate, didn't want
you to think I copied your's maybe so quick.
But happens a lot someones title is the same,
notice.I don't mind.Bound to be,with so many
on here.
julie x
well-wisher | December 6, 2010 - 21:53
Thank you for your concern,julie but I didn't think you'd copied me. I just took my title from the IP (and assumed that you'd done the same) so I couldn't really claim any ownership of it.
Cavalcaderl | December 7, 2010 - 17:28
new well-wisher
Hi! Thanks hurry get to carol event,
lost my glasses I see with found now
so put me behind. No but it happens all the time.
Repeats come up,and horses titles the same,strange.
all the best, can't be helped. Glasses on top curtain on the washing machine,that's a new place for me. Take care.ok.
Julie x