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I have 1193 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3023944 times and 1221 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1732 of my 15,836 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1771 votes

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short history of time

God bless king time death ruin of all pleasure and pain The wheel turns again desire begets a friend free in a long tramp ache to the cravings fire...
Cherry

Grimms2

Dad was better fun than an alarm clock. I used to watch him before I was old enough to get locked up in school. The light in my room was on the death...
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gallows

I’m a creature of the past Sometimes the present Things I will do with placards and posts Rarely, I’ll be me as a child will be - no history teacher...
Cherry

Grimms

Dad pushed the room door open. I hadn’t heard him, or the door going. I was sitting side saddle on my bed, one leg a comfortable numbness, bare feet...

a stumbling block

All is grace All is despair When you are not there When you are there For god’s sake For our sake Where is he? Where he is I hear a voice I hold a...

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1732 of my comments have received 1771 Great Feedback votes

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gritty and grimy, so he's a

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

gritty and grimy, so he's a cop, interesting. terriific wring. whose story is it, Gallacher or Crowe's? If it's Crowe's the descripton of him given (change of point of view) by Gallacher needs a bit of work and kinda jams the narrative. 

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Posted in A Quality of inertia (WIP)

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Word origin of 'vade mecum'

Posted on Tue, 26 Nov 2019

Word origin of 'vade mecum'

C17: from Latin, literally: go with me

I will walk with you a while in your writing. Alan Bennet's idea  of reading as a hand held out which you grasp. Munch's scream is so popular because it allows for...

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Posted in Scream

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Amen. 

Posted on Fri, 22 Nov 2019

Amen. 

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Posted in He Who is Sent

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a little grace is poetry that

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

a little grace is poetry that stretches the soul of even hungry ghosts. 

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Posted in Second thoughts

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yep, I read this. I like the

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

yep, I read this. I like the idea of all that fighting over a simulacra. But it was really virtue they were fighting over. Something they couldn't possess. I guess there's a bit of the idea of ideal forms thrown in as well. My answer is longer...

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Posted in trojan horse

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fireworks is big business,

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019

fireworks is big business, but a shrinking business. I guess councils will opt out of having displays. What a waste of money? 

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Posted in Pets And Fireworks.

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I guess we all select books

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

I guess we all select books that we think has value. Our values differ. As do our tastes. 

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Posted in Alien Opportunities Ch.1 : New Opportunities Part 3

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It was elves. Elves were

Posted on Fri, 18 Oct 2019

It was elves. Elves were cheaper than robots are now. So they employed them instead of humans. Watch your tense. You tend to move from present to pass tense and back again. |No biggy, but keep an eye on it. 

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Posted in Horn and Hardart Automat - (A day spent with my dad)

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I guess we're all armoured by

Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019

I guess we're all armoured by indifference - unitl we're undone. 

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Posted in Consulting the Runes

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yes, I guess it's true we did

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

yes, I guess it's true we did test rats to death and they'd starve for their fix. I guess it's payback. 

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Posted in Swiss Delight

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