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My stories have been read 248287 times
and 13 of my stories have been cherry picked.
34 of my 955 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 32 votes
Rosalind J. Lee
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My stories
Stories of East Sussex
Long ago, when I was a child, there were two sets of people living in the Crowborough area of East Sussex who were very different to the normal human...
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Trees
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Trees The trees stand at the edge of the garden fenced off from the Nature reserve. Tall thin red branched trees, slowly turning to brown. The spring...
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Knowledge
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please forgive me this one, its ages since I tried to write a poem, and this is the first real try out of my new computer - so.... Knowledge. It's...
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Leggings - the wild wake up!
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Do you recall ever waking up as a child, from an uncertain dream. Fighting a monster in a dark place? I just did. About 01.30 hours, when my QD chill...
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Codes.
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The Code. I awoke one morning On my forearms the code Of imprisonment and remembrance Came nearly intact to the surface. I wasn't sure if it was for...
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its a haiku stream....
Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2016
thank you. I love the haiku.. and the tanka greatly :)
Read full commentPosted in Coffee Moon Haiku Set
claps :)
Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2015
very nicely done, i thought that quote was down to a boxer... I stand corrected.
thank you for sharing.
Read full commentPosted in This Isn't a Dummy Run...
very nice...
Posted on Sun, 13 Sep 2015
thank you I enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in Heavy Blow
bravo!
Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015
lovely :)
Read full commentPosted in Through fragrant Esplanades
yes minimal poetry.
Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015
Nicely done, reads very well.
Read full commentPosted in Five Days a Week
loved the first stanza
Posted on Sat, 15 Aug 2015
not sure about the second one. 'Things' too vague.
also '
As not-quite-water
Seeps out through the water. ' what does this mean? The end of the poem should be satisfying it should conclude.... this fails to do this...
Read full commentPosted in Holes in the bag.
I fear this falls short
Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015
of what it could be. You need to carefully edit for places where when read aloud it doesn't run right.
things like: 'Did you watch us with your lamp-like eyes' to 'Did you watch with lamp-like eyes'
which makes it more direct and...
Read full commentPosted in Mirror Angels - re-written
I like this
Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015
you need to edit carefully now, and it should be perfect.
Read full commentPosted in Upon The Beach
i write on trains too...
Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2014
I like your focus in this peice. it's clear and very sharp.
have you seen this?
http://www....
Read full commentPosted in Train Journeys
lol
Posted on Thu, 08 May 2014
I'm concerned about the leggy jumper? is this a real jumper? mine only have arms...lol!
plus some of the descriptions of the doggies shortness - a vertical disability -are over emphasised and read a little bit clumsy and I personally...
Read full commentPosted in Small Secrets
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