They Haven't Loved
By JoseHdz
Fri, 15 Jul 2011
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I can’t stand when
People say
Mature love
Is beyond jealousy
And full of trust--
They haven’t loved.
I want you
To yearn for my
Every thought
And howl at
My silent poems.
I want you to feel
Me in your
Inner thighs
And ache for
My outer mind.
Let me fall
And roll onto
Your vast sky--
Like a
Fluid pen
To the flesh
Of a warm
Sheet of paper.
I want you
To be the
Exclamation mark
At the end
Of my wordless poems.
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First thought. Like it, but
First thought. Like it, but am a bit unsure about Vast sky.
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I definitely like it Jose,
I definitely like it Jose, powerful and full of meaning with lovely imagery.
Beeme xx
k.
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I really like it too
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I really like it too
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I too love the imagery in
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I too love the imagery in this one, Jose. Well done on the cherry;-)
Tina
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I loved the imagery on this,
Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on
I loved the imagery on this, it is powerful.
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new JoseHDZ Really
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new JoseHDZ
Really good,romance, fluid pen and last stanza great.
I want you
To be the
Exclamation mark
At the end
Of my worthless poem
So powerful the way word's roll.
congrats; on the cherry!
cavalcaderl julie
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