Motion by littleditty

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Motion by littleditty

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Excellent, littleditty. So much in such a short piece - two favorite lines:

Motion melts the stillness and triangular rounded ripples
surf like mercury to the wild banks of the sleeping shore.

And she? Kneading clothes of dough against a smooth and ragged
rock

This really took me for a ride, and I loved how the title kept popping up throughout. I loved it, just the way it is, from beginning to end.

Thanks Foster - I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for putting it here - any edit suggestions welcome, on anything i sub - wondering about too much froth and spumes etc in this one still! Cheers - nicky x

 

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