It's OK To Hate

By alang

Tue, 20 Dec 2011
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it's ok to hate all men
for the actions of a few
and likewise it's ok
to hate all women too.
it's ok to hate all races
for the same applies here
the deviled lies and different vibes
and the ever present fear.

but no! we must evolve!
but no! we must evolve!
but no! we must evolve!
but stagnation is easier.

Certificate 15
Channelling The Muse
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Comments

Submitted by Parson Thru on
That's a challenging piece. It kindles something, though.

Parson Thru

Submitted by scratch on
I'm all for poetry that makes us think - and this definitely tics that box. I do think that you owe us a few more poetic clues. The repetition should act as that clue but I'm afraid that my poetic intellect is not good enough to get it! Somehow though I quite like it. One technical observation - correct the spelling (present) last line first stanza.