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I have 58 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 49641 times and 59 of my stories have been cherry picked.
63 of my comments have been voted Great feedback.

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I am an unpublished amateur. Who knows, one day that might change.

Thank you for reading my stuff. If you like what you read please let me know and if you can advise me on how to improve please let me know that too.

My stories

Cherry
Poem of the week

2 AM

Western cabaret.

Cherry

Marbella Life

People watching.

Cherry

Daniel 23: Samson

950 words.

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Daniel 21: Aeroplanes

950 words.

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A second piece from you - a

Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2014

A second piece from you - a poem this time and a damn fine one it is too.  There is lots to like in this and I particularly admire the soundless feet image.

However the whole is greater than its parts and all that.  

That you have managed to engender a fabulous relational aspect between the two in the full glare of the Big Top and under the wondrous scrutiny of the throng is really the thing that sets this poem apart from the crowd.  At the close I am left wondering if he was spurned, or denied, or usurped.  I guess that I'll never know for sure but I'm guessing at denied.

This is a great piece of poetry.  ABCtales has a great, new talent on its hands.

Posted in The Acrobat

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I love this!  Welcome to

Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2014

I love this!  Welcome to ABCtales Tina.  Can't wait to read more..

Now, I've read it a few times and with each read I have liked it more.  There is a lot going on here.  A fragmented mind at work in terms of the poetic narrative perhaps.  Just needs tightening and a little sorting out.  Even so it's very good.  Hope you're ok with that (obviously subjective) opinion.

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