142 of my comments have received 154 Great Feedback votes
Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014
I cannot stress the importance of commenting on other writers work. The benefits aren't just the obvious ones of providing feedback and recieving reciprocal comments yourself. The hidden benefit is that your own writing standard...Read full comment
Posted in Dust
A second piece from you - a
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2014
A second piece from you - a poem this time and a damn fine one it is too. There is lots to like in this and I particularly admire the soundless feet image.
However the whole is greater than its parts and all that.
That...Read full comment
Posted in The Acrobat
Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2014
There is gravity to the prose that suggests that the philosophical nature of self questioning is going to be important as a foundation to the writing. Whilst very different in content parts of the prose style of this piece...Read full comment
Posted in A Beginning to an End
Yes, when I first read this I
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2013
Yes, when I first read this I admired the authenticity of the voice and was curious, for obvious reasons, about your opinion about challenges of writing in a 'childish' idiom.
I was struck by how hard this was when I...Read full comment
Posted in Inside (1)
I just delivered an Angel
Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2013
I just delivered an Angel Gabriel costume to school for my son (see left) despite me being a born again atheist. He has been revelling in his new found God-given super powers that include balls of powerful light that he can throw at...Read full comment