144 of my comments have received 158 Great Feedback votes
Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014
I cannot stress the importance of commenting on other writers work. The benefits aren't just the obvious ones of providing feedback and recieving reciprocal comments yourself. The hidden benefit is that your own writing standard...Read full comment
Posted in Dust
A column of comments is often
Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014
A column of comments is often a barometer of the talent of the writer and the quality of their submissions. I'd like to add to the column. I missed this one Philip, don't quite know how.
I like the whole thing but...Read full comment
Posted in Smoke
A second piece from you - a
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2014
A second piece from you - a poem this time and a damn fine one it is too. There is lots to like in this and I particularly admire the soundless feet image.
However the whole is greater than its parts and all that.
That...Read full comment
Posted in The Acrobat
Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2014
There is gravity to the prose that suggests that the philosophical nature of self questioning is going to be important as a foundation to the writing. Whilst very different in content parts of the prose style of this piece...Read full comment
Posted in A Beginning to an End
Yes, when I first read this I
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2013
Yes, when I first read this I admired the authenticity of the voice and was curious, for obvious reasons, about your opinion about challenges of writing in a 'childish' idiom.
I was struck by how hard this was when I...Read full comment
Posted in Inside (1)