155 of my comments have received 171 Great Feedback votes
Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014
I cannot stress the importance of commenting on other writers' work. The benefits aren't just the obvious ones of providing feedback and recieving reciprocal comments yourself. The hidden benefit is that your own writing standard will improve...Read full comment
Posted in Dust
I want to know who this image
Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2014
I want to know who this image grabber is. Dealing as she does in the currency of investigation and inspection. Seems like she doesn't mind - doesnt care about the consequences no matter how dire they might be. Does she want to escape reality,...Read full comment
Posted in Literary Excavation
A column of comments is often
Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014
A column of comments is often a barometer of the talent of the writer and the quality of their submissions. I'd like to add to the column. I missed this one Philip, don't quite know how.
I like the whole thing but especially the simple...Read full comment
Posted in Smoke
A second piece from you - a
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2014
A second piece from you - a poem this time and a damn fine one it is too. There is lots to like in this and I particularly admire the soundless feet image.
However the whole is greater than its parts and all that.
That you have...Read full comment
Posted in The Acrobat
I love this! Welcome to
Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2014
I love this! Welcome to ABCtales Tina. Can't wait to read more..
Now, I've read it a few times and with each read I have liked it more. There is a lot going on here. A fragmented mind at work in terms of the poetic narrative perhaps. ...Read full comment
Posted in DRIP
"nicotine tarred walls(.)
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2014
"nicotine tarred walls(.) Many of the patients"
"that wouldn’t meet my eye, or look at me." If she wouldn't meet your eye then we know she couldn't look?
"The walls were a sickly mildew green and (the) radiator"
"ward...Read full comment
Posted in school photos 36
Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2014
There is gravity to the prose that suggests that the philosophical nature of self questioning is going to be important as a foundation to the writing. Whilst very different in content parts of the prose style of this piece reminded me...Read full comment
Posted in A Beginning to an End