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142 of my comments have received 154 Great Feedback votes

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Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

I cannot stress the importance of commenting on other writers work.  The benefits aren't just the obvious ones of providing feedback and recieving reciprocal comments yourself.  The hidden benefit is that your own writing standard...

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Posted in Dust

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Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2014

Your writing is convincing and packed with intrigue and excitement.  ...

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Posted in Chapter One: The Old Compton Street Murder

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Posted on Sun, 29 Jun 2014

A good twist right at the end.  Well done Daveking71....

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Posted in Bathroom Ghost

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A second piece from you - a

Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2014

A second piece from you - a poem this time and a damn fine one it is too.  There is lots to like in this and I particularly admire the soundless feet image.

However the whole is greater than its parts and all that.  


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Posted in The Acrobat

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I love this!  Welcome to

Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2014

I love this!  Welcome to ABCtales Tina.  Can't wait to read more..

Now, I've read it a few times and with each read I have liked it more.  There is a lot going on here.  A fragmented mind at work in terms of the...

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Posted in DRIP

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"nicotine tarred  walls(.)

Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2014

"nicotine tarred  walls(.)  Many of the patients"

"that wouldn’t meet my eye, or look at me."  If she wouldn't meet your eye then we know she couldn't look?

"The walls were a...

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Posted in school photos 36

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Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2014


There is gravity to the prose that suggests that the philosophical nature of self questioning is going to be important as a foundation to the writing.  Whilst very different in content parts of the prose style of this piece...

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Posted in A Beginning to an End

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Yes, when I first read this I

Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2013

Yes, when I first read this I admired the authenticity of the voice and was curious, for obvious reasons, about your opinion about challenges of writing in a 'childish' idiom.  

I was struck by how hard this was when I...

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Posted in Inside (1)

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I just delivered an Angel

Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2013

I just delivered an Angel Gabriel costume to school for my son (see left) despite me being a born again atheist.  He has been revelling in his new found God-given super powers that include balls of powerful light that he can throw at...

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Posted in Julian Asks About The Nativity Play ( Christmas Special)

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Excellent.  Now get your

Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2013

Excellent.  Now get your sleeves rolled up, start writing and get stuck in!...

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Posted in Cat-Omen