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My stories have been read 62176 times and 75 of my stories have been cherry picked.
108 of my 4,892 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 118 votes
108 of my comments have received 118 Great Feedback votes
A second piece from you - a
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2014
A second piece from you - a poem this time and a damn fine one it is too. There is lots to like in this and I particularly admire the soundless feet image.
However the whole is greater than its parts and all that.
That...Read full comment
Posted in The Acrobat
Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2014
There is gravity to the prose that suggests that the philosophical nature of self questioning is going to be important as a foundation to the writing. Whilst very different in content parts of the prose style of this piece...Read full comment
Posted in A Beginning to an End
Yes, when I first read this I
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2013
Yes, when I first read this I admired the authenticity of the voice and was curious, for obvious reasons, about your opinion about challenges of writing in a 'childish' idiom.
I was struck by how hard this was when I...Read full comment
Posted in Inside (1)
I just delivered an Angel
Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2013
I just delivered an Angel Gabriel costume to school for my son (see left) despite me being a born again atheist. He has been revelling in his new found God-given super powers that include balls of powerful light that he can throw at...Read full comment
"The fresh-faced rookie cop
Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2013
"The fresh-faced rookie cop edged his polished toe-cap away from the blood oozing out the body at their feet."
There's your first line right there. Juggle the first paragraph round and make it grab harder....Read full comment
Posted in The Rookie