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Posted by alphadog1 on December 23, 2011 - 21:23

a secret longing,
A wish fulfilled;
a tender touch,
a silence, stilled.
here...
under mistletoe.

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scratch | December 24, 2011 - 10:59

Concise and well chosen words, I can feel the touch of lips here. A quick question if I may. Why have you chosen to capitalise the start of the second line?

alphadog1 | December 28, 2011 - 18:32

Hi Scratch, sorry for the late reply... I am afraid that's a typo... (however I might have done it subconsciously.) I am a bit of a fan of the old mistletoe, as I have never been kissed under it, ever... I think there is something quite erotic about it. Something suggestive and arousing, at least for me.