The (very) End


from the ABC set In Love with Mr Jiggs

Now, if a fabulous UFO
broad as a postcode
dropped from the clouds and hovered
so tower block and office block aerials
tickled the anti-clockwise rotation of its gun-metal underside,
I wouldn’t wake you.

I would close the windows
so the sharp, collective intake
of everyone in the world wouldn’t rouse you
from your puffy sleep.

I’d unplug the phone so ex-friends and family,
inspired to give you the benefit of the doubt,
couldn’t let you know the news.

And I’d get dressed in the other room,
brass teeth clicking as I slowly zipped up.
I’d spread my weight on the stairs
and pull the door softly closed,
stepping out in socked feet
into the pink, humming glow of a second chance

leaving you, mouth wide like a dead rodent,
chocolate flecks and pasty crumbs
caught on stubble.

Between each snore
the whole of humanity
zooms a further thousand light years away from you.
This is our reward.

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | September 13, 2011 - 20:50

wonderful

marvin the pig | September 13, 2011 - 21:24

Oink!

Silver Spun Sand | September 14, 2011 - 08:00

Ditto, ditto;-)

fatboy74 | September 14, 2011 - 09:02

Marvellous. :-)

tcook | September 14, 2011 - 13:18

I like this very much - do you mean 'pasty' of 'pastry' crumbs? Pasty is fine - but I just wondered if that was what you wanted!

msiagirl | September 15, 2011 - 08:20

hahaha really funny poem.

tcook | September 15, 2011 - 17:31

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celticman | September 15, 2011 - 18:16

Great stuff.

oldpesky | September 16, 2011 - 18:34

Only found this because it was the facebook pick of the day. Well done batfowling for writing it, and well done Tony for picking it.

w.w.j.abercrombie | September 17, 2011 - 12:15

brilliant

Nicola6 | September 23, 2011 - 05:25

Love this, especially the 'romance' classification. Good choice for pick of the day.