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I have 16 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 23477 times and 15 of my stories have been cherry picked.
5 of my 1,738 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 5 votes

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simon whitworth

My stories

Gold cherry

Gloaming

There I was, not coming or going, trying to find a path through, on and through and into the old ways and see how it was before. And so stood useless...
Cherry

The Lookout Boy

No blood relation. Sentry at the gatehouse of some vast and rambling estate. His wife had followed him down through the years, held the front-line in...
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Poem of the week

That Morning

In this dream I never told, I ran away.
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Cherry

Too Much Sky - Prologue

Something old I never finished editing that I forgot to post. maybe the beginning of a novel, I'm not sure.
Cherry

Flat Badger

and I know I’ve just crushed its skull, spread its brains for the happy crows, laid suicide supper for the loveable fox -

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5 of my comments have received 5 Great Feedback votes

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A lovely poem. Nice flow and

Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016

A lovely poem. Nice flow and probably more difficult to write than we imagine, as it reads so easily. 

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Posted in The Hare in the Middle

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Well deserved poem of the

Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016

Well deserved poem of the week, writing the opposite of fuck you heavy-handedness.

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Posted in Cannibal

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The point where you describe

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2013

The point where you describe the torch's myriad reflections in the quartz walls, was one of those wonderful visual treats where you have to pause the reading because the image is so strong it interferes with the words you are trying to process....

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Posted in Coventry carol

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A great tribute biggus. 

Posted on Wed, 27 Nov 2013

A great tribute biggus. 

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Posted in GO NOW BILL

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I'd guessed why you chose to

Posted on Wed, 14 Dec 2011

I'd guessed why you chose to do it in this way for that reason and I suppose it brings up the question of who we are writing for. Death of a Son (who died in a mental hospital aged one) Something has ceased to come along with me. Something...Read full comment

Posted in Details of life