Intervention

You say "I don't remember."
but that's all I do.
Think back and hold on tight.
Hands in prayer or frantic;
gripping at your skin,
leaving tyre-track handprints
which tarnish your prestige.

And I know you can't bare
to look at me.
There's no time for second chances.
I filter the air with my hands.

Unravel people-
flocked together like sheep.
Attempt to group together
all of the warmth and joy,
and make it mean something.

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Comments

Highhat | August 21, 2011 - 05:11

Hi Beeme- a dramatic poem with your usual dark twist . I enjoyed it.
Do you mean "prestige" ?

I especially like the line
" I filter the air with my hands.."
but really all the lines are so poignant
with such beautiful profundity
;)Pia

Beeme | August 21, 2011 - 09:19

Thanks Pia, for the life of me I couldn't remember the spelling of prestige. :) I'm glad you enjoyed.

Thanks for the cherry abctales.

Beeme xx

seashore | August 21, 2011 - 09:22

Great stuff - you really are on a roll, Beeme.

Beeme | August 21, 2011 - 10:37

aww thank you Seashore :-)

Beeme xx