Poem

Sorry Crackers', have to take this at face value, it's very good.

Outright admiration and not a little envy that you can pack so much into this, really liked :-) atb lena

*weeps* a humorless day, what's next? Will the police confiscate the trampoline my raccoons stole?

Luckily my son's platinum trampoline is legitimate property, so you can say I have a spare one.

Thanks E & L

Beautifully succint and evocative. Margot

I see you've been trying to phone mum again. Don't blame her, she has to count her hairnets in preparation for yet another lonely day at the raccoon factory.

Your loving overgrown foetus,
Rufus

new crackersville
very good in such few words
but it's sad
well connected to the point.
makes one think
is it true!well deserved cherry!
julie

No, not your mother son, whatever gave you that idea?

julie thanks

A moving piece succinctly done. Excellent! :-)

whiskey, thanks