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You hold me like the moon is held
Still in the bright, blue, Spring sky.

You embrace me like the seawall
Encircles Canvey Island.

You catch my words like a bucket
Catching water from a leaking water
pipe.

You kiss me like the streetlights
Kiss the night.

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emma2004 | February 21, 2011 - 17:43

Cute...like a song by Everything But the Girl...it needs music.

insertponceyfre... | February 21, 2011 - 18:10

this is beautiful harveyjoseph!

Dynamaso | February 22, 2011 - 07:30

I agree with Emma - could be a song I'd enjoy listening to, for sure.

seashore | February 22, 2011 - 09:57

Love this

shoe | February 22, 2011 - 12:07

Equals more than the sum of it's parts, very fine indeed.

harveyjoseph | May 8, 2011 - 12:53

thanks for positive feedback - I have actually written and recorded music to this one too; not sure my voice is anything like Tracey Thorne's though...