Ageing

By Highhat

Sun, 27 Feb 2011
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8 comments
 

Life is slowing down
steps
no haste
young people
walking quickly
answers taking time
getting up from the chair
patiently
tolerance
honesty
the past
streaming through
thoughts
future is
unimportant
now is breathing
in body
contemplation and
concern
characteristics
of
ageing

Certificate U
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I like this, Pia...None of us is exempt from this, unfortunately, or fortunately, as some may say;-) The layout works well, and lends a kind of doggedness to the whole thing. Well done! Tina

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you very much Tina- I liked your comment ;)Pia

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Really like this one Pia and like Tina says the layout is really effective. :-)

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you Fatboy- So glad you read and commented ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Pia, yes that thing called aging, is creeping up on us all, you tell it so well in the piece. Thanks for the read. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you Jenny- glad you could identify. ;)Pia

Submitted by jonahs cough on
really enjoyed this pia. i know it's been said before but the structure does really make it sound like the words of a breathless and elderly person. thanks for the read.

Submitted by Highhat on
Yeah It takes my breath away sometimes Jonahs- thanks for your kind comment. Glad you popped by. ;)Pia