She strode into the apartment as though she owned the place. The settings called for her kind of movement. The penthouse was high- fashion and the party was at a pitch pace.
Goldilox sat down on a barstool the host only just had risen from. In front of her,on the bar table, was a bowl of pretzels. Goldi was feeling obnoxious. She took a worm from her psychadelic aperetif and placed it in the pretzel bowl. She then took a swirl on the bar stool until it almost hit the floor in rotation. She got up and left the room.
The host came along and tried to restore the chair to its normal height and found that it was irreverably useless.
At the same time one of the other guests cried out , “I just ate a worm!”
The host scurried over to console him while saying that the worm was a hallucogenic kind which would do no harm. This worried the guest even more so they decided to put him to bed.
Meanwhile Goldilox had infiltrated the sleeping quarters. Her aim was to take a snooze, having eaten her fill in pretzels and hallucogenic worms.
Goldi had torn off the bed clothes thinking that she would make the bed with clean sheets. She didn’t bother to sleep in other people's used sheets.
She was in the walk-in wardrobe looking for bedclothes when the host and the overly distressed guest entered the bedroom.
“What the devil! “ was the outburst , “ I made this bed only this very morning !” He was perplexed.
Goldi had heard what was happening and decided to hightail out of the joint before she possibly lost her status as one of the big city’s gottabes.
She would return another day to yet another of the high fashion shindigs.

Comments
skinner_jennifer | August 22, 2010 - 13:42
Highhat,
This is a very strange story, but still very
amusing.
Jenny.
tcook | August 22, 2010 - 14:03
I think you've done well - it just needs a little work on the phrasing. It's a great interpretation. Keep at it!
Highhat | August 22, 2010 - 14:20
Thanks for the comments Jenny and Tony.
Tony- I am afarid I find it very difficult working on the phrasing as my english is just not up to standard. I haven't used it for years and live in a foreign country where we don't speak english. But thank you very much for the encouragment. I will try.
darkenwolf | August 25, 2010 - 13:18
Good take on the IP: couldn't be further from the original if you tried.
Don't beat yourself up about the phrasing; just write the way you feel most comfortable.
;)
Highhat | August 25, 2010 - 16:28
I really like your comments darkenwolf. They are so encouraging. Thanks a lot ;)
(are you a tutor?)(teacher?)
darkenwolf | August 25, 2010 - 17:13
i wouldn't have the patience - but i've done a three writing courses with the OU and got myself a diploma in literature and creative writing. I had some of my tutors pulling their hair out at times but their lessons stuck. Just sharing the wisdom they gave me. Glad i can be of help and i do like your writing.
;)
Highhat | August 26, 2010 - 09:00
That explains a couple of things ;)I think that you are a very good writer and comments coming from you mean a lot especially with your experience. Thanks
pia xx
darkenwolf | August 26, 2010 - 09:02
it is my pleasure - keep up the good work
;)
Kahdai | August 30, 2010 - 21:59
haha, well done Pia, ii remeber most of the story yet no idea what became hallucinogenic worms! K
Highhat | August 31, 2010 - 08:58
I think the hallucogenic worms came around the 80ties! I'm not sure whether they really were hallucenogenic I just remember them being in drinks. Yuk wouldn't want to try ;)
Kahdai | September 1, 2010 - 15:46
:/