Just for the night IP
By Highhat
Sun, 07 Aug 2011
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16 comments
Just for the night
We’ll stick around
To see the paper moon
Half-covered by silky clouds
We’ll sleep in the garden
By the green wheelbarrow
Old and worn
Overgrown with violets
We’ll breathe in the sweet summer
darkness
And think of nothing important
For the morning
Brings a thousand things to do
So we will leave tomorrow alone
Just for the night
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This is quite delicious,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is quite delicious, Pia;-) A brilliant take on the I.P.
Tina;-)
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This is lovely, Pia! The
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
This is lovely, Pia! The whole poem has a soft, lucid feel. Love it :)
Magic xxx
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Oh Pia this is marvelous,
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
Oh Pia this is marvelous, you've painted a lovely scene, sleeping in a wheelbarrow...I love it!
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Just beautiful, I especially
Just beautiful, I especially love;
"We’ll breathe in the sweet summer
darkness
And think of nothing important"
the whole poem has a soft, soothing quality.
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Love this Pia - very clever
Permalink Submitted by Overthetop1 on
Love this Pia - very clever use of the IP.
Overthetop1
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Pia, this is a wonderful
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Pia,
this is a wonderful piece and full of description.
I love the idea of the paper moon and breathing in
the sweet summer darkness. And so much hope at the
end.
Simply blissfull!
Thankyou for the read Pia.
Jenny.
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Hi Pia :))) a lovely
Permalink Submitted by prettyrose on
Hi Pia :))) a lovely straightforward and simple but well executed poem well done and good luck :
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing
Trish :)
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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