Just for the night IP

This is quite delicious, Pia;-) A brilliant take on the I.P.

Tina;-)

This is lovely, Pia! The whole poem has a soft, lucid feel. Love it :)

Magic xxx

Lovely!

Thanks Tina- glad you enjoyed and thank you for telling me

;)Pia

Glad you enjoyed Magic and Coral- thanks for the kind comments

;)Pia

Oh Pia this is marvelous, you've painted a lovely scene, sleeping in a wheelbarrow...I love it!

Thanks Maggy
;D Pia

Great take on the IP

Thanks OP glad you think so- ;D
;)Pia

Just beautiful, I especially love;

"We’ll breathe in the sweet summer
darkness
And think of nothing important"

the whole poem has a soft, soothing quality.

Love this Pia - very clever use of the IP.

Thanks shoe and ott-- I'm really pleased you liked this one...
;)pia

Pia,

this is a wonderful piece and full of description.
I love the idea of the paper moon and breathing in
the sweet summer darkness. And so much hope at the
end.

Simply blissfull!

Thankyou for the read Pia.

Jenny.

I am so glad that I could get you in a better mood Jenny

;)Pia

Hi Pia :))) a lovely straightforward and simple but well executed poem well done and good luck :

Keep Smiling
Keep Writing

Trish :)

Thank you very much Trish- what a wonderful comment.
Yeah keep writing and smiling--
;D Pia