The love of my life
By Highhat
Tue, 23 Nov 2010
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If I were to have a love
it would necessarily be
Life
all the small things
that add up
the loneliness
is not predominant
just comes along with
being on my own
with life
it may be a rollercoaster ride
but as long as life is by my side
I will see it through
regardless
Good friends to make my day
to blow the blues away
spurring me on
and on and on
filling the gaps
between
idleness
and fruitful pursuits
Life would be the love
of my life
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Beautiful poem Pia :) I like
Beautiful poem Pia :)
I like the way this poem looks as well as its content.
'Good friends to make my day
to blow the blues away
spurring me on
and on and on'
This stanza stuck out for me in particular, you need friends and family in this life, couldn't have put your words better myself.
Great job
X
Pinda
*Thank you for your kind words on 'Nothing Has Changed'.
xx
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this poem sends out a
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
this poem sends out a beautiful message
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Hi Pia, your poem puts
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Pia,
your poem puts everything into perspective, life is
for living and being happy with your life is so
important. Thanks again for giving us the reader
hope.
Jenny.
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Yes thank you Pia its
Yes thank you Pia its fantastic! :D x K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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"If I were to have a love it
"If I were to have a love
it would necessarily be
Life"
Very practical common sense. I mean you cannot love anything if you are dead can you? Beautiful philosophy. Thanks for the clarity Pia!
Cheers! Nolan
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I thought this was
I thought this was excellent. I like the spareness and serenity of it.
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