The love of my life

Beautiful poem Pia :)
I like the way this poem looks as well as its content.

'Good friends to make my day
to blow the blues away
spurring me on
and on and on'

This stanza stuck out for me in particular, you need friends and family in this life, couldn't have put your words better myself.

Great job

X
Pinda

*Thank you for your kind words on 'Nothing Has Changed'.
xx

Thanking you as always for your kind comment Pinda
;)Pia

this poem sends out a beautiful message

Thank you Maggy
;)Pia

Hi Pia,

your poem puts everything into perspective, life is
for living and being happy with your life is so
important. Thanks again for giving us the reader
hope.

Jenny.

Yeah Jenny- we only have this one go at it
Pia ;)

Yes thank you Pia its fantastic! :D x K

Thanks Kahdai
;)Pia

"If I were to have a love
it would necessarily be
Life"

Very practical common sense. I mean you cannot love anything if you are dead can you? Beautiful philosophy. Thanks for the clarity Pia!

Cheers! Nolan

Well Nolan I can't quite fugure out whether you are being sarcastic. But thanks for reading and commenting anyway.
;)Pia

I thought this was excellent. I like the spareness and serenity of it.

Thank you very much Shoe for reading and commenting. Greatly appreciated.
;)Pia