Missing

By Highhat

Sun, 28 Aug 2011
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11 comments
 

The silent sunbeams
leave a trail
of memories
from a past
not at ease
with life
but struggling
to keep up
with normality
and sanity
falling short
future dim
present incomprehensible
past chaos
nothing seems right
and it all comes flooding back
the silence
killing happiness
feeling numb
useless and incapable
only to feed off the day
with no rest at night
going from day to day
with no purpose
only fake intentions
no fulfilment
missing the right ones
the suns of love

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Comments

Submitted by seashore on
Definitely relate to this one Pia - very well expressed. x

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
So can I, Pia. You put it well;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you Coral and Tina ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
A very poignant piece Pia and like coral said, very well expressed. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thanks Jenny for your comment ;)PIa

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
"going from day to day with no purpose only fake intentions" there's a lot of depth to this piece and a soothing rhythm.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thanks Maggy ;)Pia

Submitted by ScoZen on
Hej HH. Time I think to slip into the Vesterbro nightlife and seek fulfilment. Passe pa
ScoZen

Submitted by Highhat on
There has just been a shooting in Vesterbro, outside a Mosque- so think I'll stay away. You know ScoZen, at the moment I am living North of Copenhagen near the forest so maybe I should go out into nature and seek fulfillment-!! Tak ;)Pia

Submitted by Overthetop1 on
`Missing the right ones/the Suns of love. Beautiful ending to a really well-expressed, heartfelt poem.

Overthetop1

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you very much OTT-just love the praise you are so good at giving.. ;)Pia