No more

Sounds about right!

Highhat,
A very strong, emotional piece. The words you felt
release from the shackles of a diseased mind. Very
good way to express yourself.
Jenny.

Thank you Jenny- glad you liked it ;)
pia

this is really good Pia - Jenni's right - a very strong peice

This is a great piece, Pia! I love the repetition, it really hammers home the ideas expressed. Especially loved these lines:

'No more love affairs. One more denying than the other. No more chapters about lovers. No more lovers.'

I look forward to seeing more from you :)

Magic xxx

Thank you very much Insert and Magic- I admire both your work a lot so words from you are fantastic.

Thanks for the cherry ;)

I may not give up writing now. It is a bit difficult- being foreign and such . . . ;)

Pia your English is better than some English people's English. I really hope you do continue writing

Thanks Insert but it can't match a lot of other abctalers by 100 miles. That's just the way it is. A very simple vocabulary but I can translate and that helps a lot. I probably can't stop writing anyway;)
pia

Keep writing Pia! If maybe just for us? Very emotional poem to me this one, I expect it make sense to everyone someway or another :) K

Thanks a lot for the encouraging words Kahdai. I hope this makes sense to a lot of people !!!
;) pia

Hi Pia,
Congratulations on the cherry, well deserved.
Jenny.

powerful and provocative, you are very talented, this piece is my proof! There's a real rhythm to your prose that drives every word foreword.

Thank you for the fine words maggy. I feel a kind of power in writing pieces like this , thank you for saying so.;)
pia

Well done Highhat! I really enjoyed this story! Keep posting and keep developing your skills... you have talent Highhat and true potential!

Beeme xx

Thank you very much Beeme.Your comment is truly encouraging.
pia ;)

Very powerful, Highhat. Could apply to all kinds of addiction: drugs, booze, sex - even addiction to bad relationships.

Many thanks davidgee ;)

I got a slight chill down my spine at the words No more abuse.No more abusers in your life.A dark and emotional piece,made more so by the repetition. I thought this was fantastic.

Thanks tinkerbell- I am leading a wonderful life now- thanks to a cold turkey !!! gobble gobble
;)
pia

sounds good Pia! ;) K

Thanks Kahdai for sticking with it. I tell you my life is better than good. Really enjoying it for the first time in more than 30 years. That's a long time. Was about time too.
pia ;)

Great for you Pia! I am more happy & healthy in the last 3 years, than since I was about 8! Long time since then too ;) ! x K

Yes that is a long time. I'm happy on your behalf. It's lovely to be sound in health and mind and there's nothing wrong with your poetry Kahdai ;)
pia

A very powerful and thought provoking piece, Pia. You have a gift of expressing yourself through your wonderful words. As I have already said, poetry is not my thing, but I'll certainly read more of your work.

That is a very kind comment Hulsey. Thanks a lot. Glad you enjoyed reading this. Funny- I have difficulty reading prose- poetry is more my thing.. Ha ha

;)Pia