Ocean

Pia, this is definitely a differenet take on the Ocean, I like the lines:- ships ploughing the waves the tide creased rocks spindrift sea anemone Spring fresh bouquet calm sea simply beautiful. Jenny.

Wonderful choice of vocabulary here, Pia. My favourite lines, as Jenny's. Tina;-)

Absolutely beautiful, Pia. I love every single image! Magic xxx

Highhat, Bliss "...carcass hull..." a good discription of me when I'm lying in the sand staring at the "...ethereal clouds..."

Really captures the essence Pia - well done. :-)

this conjured up really vivid images in my head. great work pia.

Hi Pia, Think you're so clever to be able to write in both Danish and English. Simple translation or dictation/ coypying is one thing, but to actually use imagination and have to transpose it from one language to another must be difficult. This poem brought back some lovely memories of a holiday taken on Bork Havven (I think that's how it's spelled) It's a little fishing village near ..damn it's gone the place with the big reptile centre? Nope gone. Anyway it was a lovely holiday and a sweet poem. I think I saw that grizzled old fisherman.