Burnt poems

Sandy feet,
toes touched,
bonfire warms,
lack of regret,
smoke in my hair.
Music in our heads,
lyrics up in flames,
dare I ask what next,
I usually be more patient,
you must have hidden magic.

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Comments

darkenwolf | August 4, 2010 - 15:28

i like it- short but sweet, it says all it needs too. good work

Kahdai | August 5, 2010 - 20:14

thankyou very much fenrir ;) K

darkenwolf | August 5, 2010 - 20:17

you are most very welcome - fenrir 2 ;>

Kahdai | August 5, 2010 - 20:33

;)