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Defending to war (drafting, any advice?)

Posted by Kahdai on May 8, 2010 - 18:57

The (explosions) fliiyihng up in the air,
sounds like (massive crowds) cheering.
The (clatter) of destruction on the ground,
is heard as (something) applause.
now yu hir hou easili
defence of your world
can turn it all to war
& war can turn it all
(on to your world?)

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WillSimpson | May 17, 2010 - 12:51

The last bit sums up so many pointless debates about peace.

Kahdai | May 19, 2010 - 11:09

Yes, it was going to be for the 'as ye sow I.P. ' I just get carried away with the war ideas & how some people feel they are hero for it! Thanks for reading Will.