draft 4; domelife
Living in a bubble
child doesn't see
no-ones allowed to know
sun always shines
while outside a tornado
pulls the home away
all they can give is love
now living in the world above
child try to work
not as easy
feed their family
outside the bubble in poverty.
Comments
MistakenMagic | April 21, 2010 - 22:43
Really happy you've decided to post these separately, Kahdai! I love the second stanza of this one ;)
Magic xxx
Kahdai | April 22, 2010 - 20:31
Thanks it was the idea :) , dont really know where am going with this one yet. xxx