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Finding in Darkness

Posted by Kahdai on October 23, 2011 - 20:09

Not knowing what to look for,
a key to an unknown door,
or a tiny star of light
for hope of outside,
even as I held it up
was fading away
yet I hold on.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | October 24, 2011 - 08:40

Simply a beautiful poem Kahdai. I like the idea of a
key to an unknown door, very mysterious.

Thankyou for sharing.

Jenny.

Highhat | October 24, 2011 - 14:12

Good to hang on to hope in the darkness Kahdai. Nice one

;)Pia

Kahdai | October 25, 2011 - 17:31

Thankyou both :) I suppose it is actually a way out and there is a scottish saying in latin dum spiro spero while I breath I hope or in some case dum spero spiro! Thanks for reading K