Maybe I am, afraid
of, of most people
in some small ways
why I need to talk
look at your faces
and you hear words
that I do not mean
It's never what I meant
what I mean to say is I
well, I do not know how
how to say it... can we
start again ask me same
same question in others
other words explains it
Comments
skinner_jennifer | October 15, 2010 - 07:36
Hi Kahdai,
is this a poem, of regret of saying the wrong thing,
then wishing to put it right by starting again?
I think we have all put our foot in it at some point
in our lives wishing we hadn't said what we said.
I hope I got the right idea with this one.
Jenny.
shoe | October 15, 2010 - 08:29
I like the stop/start dialogue, I feel it needs clarifying a little, a few tweaks and this would be better than good.
Highhat | October 16, 2010 - 09:16
I liked it too. The hesitation and the problem about making things clear to each other without misunderstanding? Well done
;)Pia
Kahdai | October 21, 2010 - 10:34
Yeah I do a lot thankyou all x