Innocent guilt (song)

Dont be mad at me again dali
were only innocent after all

trying our damdest not to be
the reason the other one fall

Hands on your hips
I try not to smile,
I can tell your mad
yet dont know why,
I dont know what I
did wrong this time.

Where are you going now
to think about what I done
til my guilt takes me over

why do I keep hurting you?
dont know why I (ki-k-keep) keep hurting you

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Comments

shoe | August 10, 2010 - 16:03

This is a very good piece, the punctuation errors make it hard to read though, I think this one is well worth the effort of getting it just right.

darkenwolf | August 10, 2010 - 17:25

keep it raw it works much better; has a lot more impact.

Kahdai | August 13, 2010 - 14:10

ooh coflicted opinions, ii dono yet i might change & add some in future... thankyou both for reading though :)