They used to call me Rhubarb & Custard


from the ABC set The deep dark lake

A rare day alone, I took the opportunity,
to take a little care of myself,
I treated myself to some sunlight,
as it's a bright, warm summery day,
paley white speckled with pink and red,
drinking up the beams in the rays,
thirsty parched for years of drought,
looked like silver glaring back at me,
from a white winter sun, to spring on snow,
it almost seems to shimmer, like dust,
so reflective, for a glimpse thought I saw,
a shadow of water, ripple across my skin,
look out the window, up at the sky,
empty, summer blue, I see something now,
a whisper thin cloud float across the sun,
like spiderweb thin layer of gossamer net,
Feeble little thing will disintegrate soon.
My eyes start to burn, I take one last look,
at the sky and the trees, close the curtains,
to be left in electrical darkness once more.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | March 7, 2010 - 21:27

This is exceptionally beautiful, k... (one tiny flaw, seventh line, last word, should read, 'drought'. What a difference an 'a' makes, eh?:-)

Seriously though, I love your imagery in this one and the last line, says it all.

Good stuff.

T xx

Kahdai | March 7, 2010 - 21:45

Thankyou T! Ofcourse, not a cold wind atall. I'm glad you like it, this is the poem yours reminded me of. :) xx

shoe | March 8, 2010 - 09:40

Beautiful images, I wonder why you have to draw the curtains again, and the title is a mystery too, lovely poem,

Kahdai | March 8, 2010 - 17:26

Thank-yu shoe, I believe it is all explained in the poem, although it's meant to be a little cryptic. Kxx