Voyager

(i)

Voyager in his long coat
and valance hat

uncovering the caulked boat
among the reeds.

Like a sodden cardinal
he unfolds the blade,

hides it within
the binding of his pouch.

No lantern or speech
the trees glisten in moonlight,

the sky gently rids itself
of cloud.

He wades through the illuminated
river - a manuscript,

still as an open page,
scent-breeze flowing

across the hilt
of water

the summit of a mountain
staggering skyward.

(ii)

Her child is a cipher
destined to be channelled north.

The buoyancy of childbirth
surprises her, the serenity

of movement through water
a semi-translucent globe

concealing her most secret fears.
Her labours afflict her; her screams

compromise the act and so
the birth-nurse slips on a muzzle,

a strip of rough leather,
set in the patient's mouth,

the leather a sour taste that settles
in these last hours on her tongue.

(iii)

The waiting among the reeds;
the submersion of his feet

in freezing water. The river is
a long-table, reflections

alive in moonlight and he cups
his hands in recognition,

mouths a silent prayer
to the dry powdery moon.

The eyes of a pregnant vixen
sparkle through the trees;

a tawny owl's wings unfold,
beat to the long-table's rhythm,

moulding its flat-face
into the neck of its prey.

Voyager listens, still sodden,
settling his uneasy boat,

finds comfort in the blessing
of a far-distant cry.

(iv)

The child coaxed from its womb,
bound in muslin,

carried over shingle, entrusted
to Voyager's hands.

Two lives marked, conjoined -
the child fresh from its liquid bed,

Voyager, old and sodden amongst the
silver reeds.

No longer a poor man he cradles
the birthing-parcel

accepts his gold, sets it
between meat and bread and blade.

She has played her part;
now the birth-nurse shuts her eyes.

Voyager tasks the river,
cuts through white silver,

two lives conjoined, released
from the binding of her pouch.

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Comments

jennifer | November 10, 2010 - 06:41

Completely mesmerizing imagery, what a delight to stumble across this this morning!

The layout/structure also adds to the feeling of detachment you are creating in the words. A real gem.

Particularly loved this whole chunk:

'He wades through the illuminated
river - a manuscript,

still as an open page,
scent-breeze flowing

across the hilt
of water

the summit of a mountain
staggering skyward.'

And this bit:

'moulding its flat-face
into the neck of its prey.'

J x

Kilb50 | November 11, 2010 - 01:05

Many thanks for your kind words Jen & cherry - much appreciated!

fatboy74 | November 11, 2010 - 13:11

Really good Kilb50 and I think mesmerizing summs it up brilliantly. :-)

tcook | November 13, 2010 - 11:34

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johnshade | November 15, 2010 - 12:46

Really like this and your other poems... some of the most interesting work I've seen on here. Strange images written in a spare, hypnotic style. The mix of clarity and mystery really lures the reader in.

Kilb50 | November 15, 2010 - 17:31

Many thanks fatboy, Tony and johnshade. Much appreciated!

littleditty | November 16, 2010 - 17:09

agree with comments, really enjoyed being drawn in to the story - and came back to read again. Liked!