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Fading

Posted by L G Meadows on September 5, 2011 - 09:34
from the ABC set Words, reflective

Fading before my time
Monochromatic greys
Forgetting that life has to be led
Not followed
Lethargic
Living in half measure
Starving myself
Rather than feasting
On life’s banquet
Stagnating
Tapering to a sigh-
Not a
Shout
Left
in
me…

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Comments

fatboy74 | September 5, 2011 - 10:27

really good L G, format and theme nicely in tandem. :-)

L G Meadows | September 5, 2011 - 10:56

Thanks for that! Appreciate it.

Sikander | September 5, 2011 - 11:33

I agree with, fatboy. A very elegant piece of work. Excellent read.

L G Meadows | September 5, 2011 - 11:35

Thanks, I am always happy when someone reads my stuff and if they like it, it's a lovely bonus!

MaggieG | September 5, 2011 - 13:45

The ending was superb :)

L G Meadows | September 5, 2011 - 14:19

Thanks Maggie!