Buildings


from the ABC set Poems

I know you still live next door
though there is rubble, litter strewn
an empty space, the place
has been blitzed bombed
but I know you are there
waiting listening wanting
for what I am not sure

Memories have sunk
into very foundations
of a building built
brick upon brick
word upon word
laboured long lovingly
by hands of fate
that scratched hours
times dates on magnolia
wooden doors brass handles

Now there are no walls
to hang a picture
but underground structure
a solid unyielding base
faithfulness that was you

I know you still live there
why I am not sure...

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Comments

fatboy74 | September 27, 2010 - 20:48

Fab and fab - love the haunting of memory - the imprint we leave on the bricks and mortar of the places we inhabit. Feels like the opening to Rebecca - wonderful middle stanza. Well done Louise. :-)

Louise178 | September 28, 2010 - 06:32

That's funny years ago my sister would urge me to read Rebecca, but I never did! Thank you for your encouraging comments Fatboy, they are much appreciated :)

Highhat | September 28, 2010 - 19:57

yes haunting words. Very imaginative
;)