Visual tones should be seen explored
I want to touch your voice
hear the sounds in your face
listen to words, I can feel and place
Black bold italic printed words
without evidence loosely typed
can masquerade play their games
go in a direction one way no return
I need to see, to know and learn
feel the hands of your heart
with velvet fingers familiar to you
speak to me, stand near stand close
let me see who you are...
I want to touch your voice.
Comments
skinner_jennifer | September 23, 2010 - 17:38
Hi Louise 178,
this is such a beautiful poem, it could almost be
talking about a blind person. I loved your description
of wanting to touch your voice.
Jenny.
Louise178 | September 23, 2010 - 17:48
Thank you Jenny, it's really about wanting to get to know someone properly, face to face.
Highhat | September 24, 2010 - 09:14
I really like the way you described a new way to get to know someone. Like ' I want to touch your voice hear the sounds in your face' great. Really very unique.
pia ;)
Kahdai | September 29, 2010 - 19:39
Ooh its lovely,! I know the feeling! K x