Bandages

I need you

to squish my face between your
hands and push out a breath

but you left

and the dust that follows destruction
swims through my body like smoke

there’s no exit here, in our place

where even the walls seem to bleed
and tubular snakes cry rusty tears

your tarred jacket lies splattered on
the floor like spilled ink over hop-scotch tiles in

black and white and sometimes blue
when we had no money left

and it was only last night that we

unpaged our Ikea constellation
our dream-home, lime-green and a bunk-bed slide for the kid

my toes curled around the idea of
matrimonial bliss as you drove my hips into the

cold checkered floor before these shards circled
my body, a broken halo of crystalline flakes

from grandma’s vase aimed at your head as
I buried you in words that did not know

where they were going, sad little bullets
led astray by a buffeting tongue

perhaps your heart is too small for my mistakes?
because I really need you now, I have something to share

so I share it with myself and cradle
my secret into tomorrow.

Discuss this piece in the abctales forum


Comments

MaggieG | September 6, 2011 - 13:25

This is not a simple cherry, but more a parfait, or a prize winning pie.

Absolutely wonderful !

maggyvaneijk | September 6, 2011 - 13:26

Thanks for your delicious comment Maggie :)

skinner_jennifer | September 6, 2011 - 14:48

Another wonderfully descriptive piece from you
maggy.

Jenny.

maggyvaneijk | September 6, 2011 - 14:48

Thanks Jenny.

Highhat | September 6, 2011 - 15:14

very well expressed Maggy- an enjoyable read. It would have taken me one simple line to say what you did so poetically with so many wonderful images..what an imagination. Another belter..

;)Pia

maggyvaneijk | September 6, 2011 - 15:15

Thanks x infinity Pia! Looking forward to meeting you in London.

Highhat | September 6, 2011 - 15:34

Oh Maggy- I have had to cancel- sorry. I am having trouble with my feet, consequently can hardly walk. I will really miss seeing you all..but I hope to come another time... Have a lovely evening..

;)Pia

maggyvaneijk | September 6, 2011 - 15:38

I'm so sorry to hear that Pia, I hope you get better soon and we will most definitely meet!

Highhat | September 6, 2011 - 16:05

Thanks Maggy. I am sure we will ;)

Florian | September 6, 2011 - 20:11

Brilliant, as always. What is an Ikea constellation?

maggyvaneijk | September 6, 2011 - 20:32

a piece of furniture bought from IKEA. Although they're supposed to be easy to set up I always find them rather complex, especially when they' have screws and things missing.

ScoZen | September 6, 2011 - 21:06

Another one I have enjoyed maggV.
A worthy cherry indeed.

maggyvaneijk | September 6, 2011 - 21:07

thanks!

barryj1 | September 8, 2011 - 18:01

You have a clever knack for painting pictures with words, but this poem has as much of an emotional (and even cerebral) quality that makes me rethink what I've just read long after turning away from the screen.

This poem speaks of common decency more than love.

celticman | September 8, 2011 - 18:04

my toes curled around the idea of
matrimonial bliss as you drove my hips into the

I really like this line. It says so much and turns the poem around into a world of hurt.

brilliant.

MistakenMagic | September 9, 2011 - 21:23

The lack of punctuation really works in this poem, Maggy. There are so many wonderful images - especially the one of ink and hopscotch! Well done on the cherries!

Magic xxx

Cavalcaderl | September 21, 2011 - 11:07

ne Highhat
Hi! sorry, can't be with us to-night.
Hope soon be well, where all be thinking of
you all of us. I had a bed once brand new,
bed broke no no jumping on it,sat down lightweight,
we had move a while, thought come in and mend. Not likely stood up for once,new one please.
castors stuffed when got new one delivered.
Sometimes old things lasted like me! hah! hah!
"I'll say a little prayer for you".
take care
julie xx

Cavalcaderl | September 22, 2011 - 14:05

new Maggyvaneiijk
Hello!
Lovely to you meet you, and all at the "Wheatsheaf"
Knew you were there somewhere. Great poet
you are. Fab; evening met all. Half glass wine, talking! couldn't drink the other half too much.
You have a definite flare for writing and gifted
like you do and done.
Mine done nice top of tea flask small drink on train, and chocolate spread finger sandwiches teeth bad.
You Read well. Super people there.
Write about you country sometime, be interesting.
Look so young!
all the best have a good day, resting up, back at Brighton now. Finshed earlier think.
cavacaderl julie xx

maggyvaneijk | September 22, 2011 - 14:06

Thanks Julie it was an absolute pleasure to meet you! Enjoy those sandwiches and thanks so much for the lemon drizzle recipe, I can't wait to make it.

Cavalcaderl | September 22, 2011 - 14:10

new MistakenMagic
Hello! Sorry you couldn't make it Lonond Wheatsheaf.
and ,meet you grand evening. Met all, we chat laugh,
all, good readers exchanged.
Poor Tony unwell couldn't make it to come.
Good way from Devon. Hope meet you another time.
and you are well, have agood day.
julie xx

Cavalcaderl | September 22, 2011 - 19:12

new Maggyvanijk
Hi! Maggy, that was a quick answer.
Well not cooked for a while?
Good get out even if on my own.
Could been the drizzle cake recipe
scales, lah! lah! lah! no.
if on grms.
Then weighing extra ingredients, press
again may gone on ounces, be different weight!
But it was lined loaf tin, they call it,tip mixture
in, only went quarter way, no rise! I always use S.R flour self raising. Should have come half way up, but
they said they liked it, wasn't quarter inch high. that something. Used be dab hand at Banoffie Pie Umm! You heard of it, do you a lot of cream cakes in your country, I think France maybe tell me sometime,
about your country interesting hear.
Never been abroad, won't fly.
take care julie xx

RachelPatricia | October 3, 2011 - 10:54

Absolutely wonderful. Left my mouth in a perfect 'O' with amazement - how you set a scene with so little words astounds me, it really does. This is probably one of my favourites of yours and I don't say that lightly, because everything you write is equally as vivid and stunning but it's such brilliant, brilliant stuff. 'Other-level' writing and I loved it - go Maggy! ;)

Rachel xx

maggyvaneijk | October 3, 2011 - 10:55

Rachel, as always you have painted a permanent smile on my face. Thank you so much!

hudsonmoon | October 3, 2011 - 23:04

They ought to have a special cupcake under those cherries for Maggy poems. Always first rate.

Rich

cormacru999 | November 28, 2011 - 17:31

you are really good. I'm so glad ABC posted your latest on facebook, where I found it. loved this one too.