Unbreakable

Absolutely brilliant as always - some people touch us in ways and create something inside us that no one else can ever touch. Keep up the good work.

Thank you, Bruce! You've also put it wonderfully - 'that no one else can ever touch' :)

Magic xxx

you are most very welcome - commenting on your work is at the same time both easy and hard:
easy to compliment for it is so deserving of compliments
and hard because it is so hard to do it justice. Keep it up!
:)

*Blushes* You always flatter me too much, Bruce! But I'm glad you enjoy my work so much - it's loyal reviewers like you that keep me writing ;)

Magic xxx

the truth is the easiest thing to say
;)

This one almost slipped by me, unnoticed;-)

It is yet another beautiful poem and I really admire the effective lined bre/ak in stanzas four and five. A nice touch.

I particularly like these lines:-

"Yet, after ever bitter blow,
your golden corner will continue
to glow."

Tina xxx

Thank you, Tina! Glad you enjoyed this one ;)

Magic xxx

You articulate what I feel the truth of love is, that piece of heart that will always belong to that one person. I really like this one magic, it's so beautiful! Sorry I am so late commenting, I am the guest editor for the October issue of abctales magazine and it has been keeping me busy, sorry if it delays my commenting on any other poems you post until October :) Well done!

Beeme xx

Very evocative as always. I liked the intermittent half and quarter rhymes. And the bre-ak device works well. And the 'sluicing rain' image.

Rob

Thank you, Beeme! 'The truth of love' - I like that ;) Well done on being guest editor, and don't worry, I'll understand if you're busy! Thanks again for such a lovely comment.

Magic xxx

Thanks, Rob :) Glad you noticed those rhymes and liked the word split!

Magic xxx

I like the first verse especially,

"Here, held captive in one slice
of an alternate reality,
protected from the cold world
of sluicing rain."

lovely poem.

Thank you, Shoe! Glad you enjoyed ;)

Magic xxx

Hi Magic, good rhyming, I like the idea of one glowing golden unbreakable part & the bre-
ak K xxx :)

Thanks Kahdai! Glad you liked that little bre/ak trick ;)

Magic xxx

Like Shoe I particularly liked the first verse : very poetic !

Thank you, Hilary! I think that has to be my favourite verse too ;)

Magic xxx

Wonderful. Second stanza is especially epic. Creative line structure.

Last stanza did u mean every? Instead of ever.

Great poem. And energy.

Cheers

Excellent spot, Jose! I did indeed - no idea how that one slipped by me - but thank you for pointing it out ;) Really glad you like this one.

Magic xxx

Not so much a comment as wanting you to know I read it and was moved by it.

xx :--)